The "cooking is fun" was generally well done but I noticed a few common mistakes.
1. Summary structure - one paragraph
2. Be careful with verbs endings -ed and -ing, for example: enjoy
"The children enjoyed cooking with their friends."
"The children are enjoying cooking with their friends."
Also adjectives ending in -ed and -ing, for example: boring and bored
"I am bored with doing homework." "Homework is boring for me."
3. Listing items, use for example and such as.
There are many good teams in England such as Liverpool, Man U and Chelsea.
There are many good teams in England, for example, Liverpool, Man U and Chelsea.
4. Using linking words such as however and in addition.
I like hot food; however, I prefer cold food.
I'm studying English and French. In addition, I'm studying Mandarin.
5. Gerunds - verb + ing
Shopping is interesting for me.
6. lots of / few / many / much
I got lots of sweets. / There are very few expensive cars in Thailand.
There are many ugly boys in the class. / I love chocolate very much.
There were two very good summaries, one from Adelia and one from Mohammad. Click here to read them.
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