Useful Linking Words

LISTING: First of all, Secondly, Thirdly, In the first place, Lastly, Finally, Last but not least.

ADDITION: also, moreover, furthermore, as well as, added to that, and, in addition.

CONTRAST: but, however, on the other hand, although, even though, whilst, despite/in spite of (the fact that).

REASONING: because, as, since

OPINION: In my view, To my mind, I feel, I believe, As far as I'm concerned, In my opinion,

EMPHASIS: above all, surely, in particular, especially, particularly, undoubtedly, there is no doubt.

CONSEQUENCE: so, consequently, as a result of, therefore.

SUMMING UP: On balance, To sum up, In conclusion.

EXAMPLE: For example, For instance, such as, like.

CLARIFYING: that is to say, in other words, namely.

Summary - Reaching for the top - Oct/Nov 2008 Ext

Perhaps the biggest problem that mountaineers have when ascending Everest is the weather; the extreme cold and unpredictable weather patterns make climbing dangerous, and can lead to frostbite. In addition, clinging to the mountain above the steep precipices is nerve-wracking. Moreover, the low oxygen count due to the high altitude makes breathing laborious. Nevertheless, climbers are attracted to Everest because of the breathtaking views, the opportunity to stand on the top of the world, chances to meet fellow climbers and the love of the sport. Finally, there is the sheer exhilaration of the challenge of climbing Everest. These things make the dangers of climbing Everest worthwhile.

Are dangerous sports worth the risk? Oct/Nov 2008

Recently, more and more people have been ending up in hospitals due to accidents resulting from dangerous or risky sports and activities. There have been calls to limit access to these activities; however, I believe that with proper regulation, people should be encouraged to participate as much as possible.

First of all, people have become bored with traditional sports and are looking for new challenges. Without access to more adventurous sports, they might give up on doing any exercise, which in the long run will lead to more hospital admissions. Furthermore, these challenges add spice to people’s lives, making them happier which will ultimately result in people leading more productive lives. Moreover, these new activities are a boon to the economy, particularly in rural areas. They create extra employment and bring much needed money into local communities, both rural and urban.

So I believe that we should not restrict people for doing these so-called ‘dangerous’ activities. Instead, we should ensure that there is a system of rules and regulations in place, which is properly enforced, to minimise the number of accidents. By doing this, we can reap all the benefits that these activities provide.